matt3916
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Page references are to the ebook. Page 270, 20.4.4, second line (beginning of second sentence) – “Air base units” should be “An air base unit” (subject-verb agreement with rest of sentence). Page 270, 20.5, second paragraph, last line – Missing a period at the end of the paragraph. Page 272, Rule 21, second line – “Sides” be “side’s.” Page 290, 22.3.1, fifth line – “(Once…” should be “(once….” Page 294, 23.3.4, second line – “impacts” should be “impact.” Page 299, 25.1.1, second line – “re-creation” vice “recreation.” (although “recreation” might best describe the player’s reactions). Page 299, 25.1.1, Supply paragraph, first line – Suggest changing “offense” to “offensive.” Page 299, 25.1.1, Adminstration Points paragraph, first line – Delete the comma after “APs.” Page 300, first line – “way need” should be “will need.”
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