Russian Heel
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Joined: 10/8/2013 From: Metro Station Vasileostrovskaya Status: offline
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ORIGINAL: Crimguy Burns - I have heard that as well. Clancy's characters are always a distraction for me due to their wooden personalities, and this belief that if they work for the government, they must be the best. Having worked in various governments that's difficult to swallow ;-D Also the dialogue is tough (and it also relates to the character depth as well): ex) "I'm not sure I can read this sensor data, Mike, the signals it's picking up are all over the map. You may want to take it over to Blake Carrington over at Langley." "I know Blake. Good people. My wife and I met him at the Presidential Ball last year." "Yeah. Shame about his son's syphilis." "Sure is." They silently walk down the vast South corridor of the Naval Academy, only the occasional echo of a morning drill passing through an open window to interrupt their thoughts. </ex> Paleeezzzeee! <ex2> The pilot wanted to splash all of the Forgers in one pass, and he could have too, but he had orders not to, and he was a naval aviator in the United States Navy from the United States of America and naval aviators in the United States Navy from the United States of America are the most disciplined naval aviators in the entire world and know the importance of discipline so naval aviators in the United States Navy from the United States of America would never launch an AIM-9 Sidewinder infrared guided missile or his M61 20mm six-barreled cannon capable of a rate of fire of 6,600 rounds per minute without the order to do so. He wasn't some Russian naval aviator full of vodka and cabbage, besides since the Ruskie obviously fired at Commander Jackson without orders, there was no doubt he would die of a 9mm induced brain hemorrhage within three minutes of returning to the Kiev, without the benefit of a final drink of vodka either. </ex2> Or my personal favorite from Red Rabbit: Moore, Ritter, and Greer the three most important men in the CIA are in the DCI's office drinking whiskey. "So Ritter, what can you tell me about Brezhnev?" "Ritter, what do you think we should do about these Soviet guys?" "We should hurt them." "But How?" "Funny you should ask, Judge..." Gripping realistic dialog.
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