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Grotius -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (11/3/2007 6:21:05 AM)

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Task Force 36 will proceed immediately to Okayama, where Hibiki will be detached to undergo extensive refit.


Very nice news! I wonder what she's getting.

The model photos are great. I can't speak for Cuttlefish, but if others have models to display, I'd sure be curious to see them.




AU Tiger_MatrixForum -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (11/3/2007 6:57:35 AM)


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ORIGINAL: Grotius

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Task Force 36 will proceed immediately to Okayama, where Hibiki will be detached to undergo extensive refit.


Very nice news! I wonder what she's getting.

The model photos are great. I can't speak for Cuttlefish, but if others have models to display, I'd sure be curious to see them.


I have model pictures I would be happy to share, but I am not too sure how relevant they are....
[;)]




Onime No Kyo -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (11/4/2007 8:34:52 PM)


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ORIGINAL: AU Tiger


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ORIGINAL: Grotius

quote:

Task Force 36 will proceed immediately to Okayama, where Hibiki will be detached to undergo extensive refit.


Very nice news! I wonder what she's getting.

The model photos are great. I can't speak for Cuttlefish, but if others have models to display, I'd sure be curious to see them.


I have model pictures I would be happy to share, but I am not too sure how relevant they are....
[;)]


Those are always relevant!

Besides, this thread needed a bump. [:D]





tocaff -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (11/4/2007 8:55:19 PM)

I'm back after getting KOed by a huge storm.  Excellent read CF!




rtrapasso -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (11/4/2007 9:19:36 PM)


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ORIGINAL: Grotius

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Task Force 36 will proceed immediately to Okayama, where Hibiki will be detached to undergo extensive refit.


Very nice news! I wonder what she's getting.



Another visit from the kempeitai? [:D] [:'(]




Cuttlefish -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (11/5/2007 9:56:58 PM)


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ORIGINAL: BrucePowers


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ORIGINAL: Cuttlefish

I got something fun in the mail yesterday and could not resist sharing. Here are a couple of pictures of a Navis Neptun 1:1250 scale metal model of Hibiki, sitting proudly on the desk in front of my monitor (please forgive the photography, I was rushed).


I like the ones from GHQ. If you don't mind I can post one or 2 of those as a comparison.


Go ahead! I would like to see what they look like.

I have also discovered that a company call Pit Road in Japan has recently released a 1/700 model of Hibiki which can be built as a waterline or full-hull model. It can also be built in 1945 configuration (which is what the ship is even now heading to Okayama to accomplish) or the ship's current configuration. I have a couple on order, though they haven't shipped yet last time I checked.




Cuttlefish -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (11/5/2007 9:59:16 PM)

June 30, 1943

Location: 175 miles north of Truk
Course: North
Attached to: TF 36
Mission: Surface Combat
System Damage: 3
Float Damage: 0
Fires: 0
Fuel: 453

Orders: Proceed to Okayama for refit

---

Destroyers Okikaze and Akebono are added to the task force. Both ships are in need of general overhaul and minor repairs, but their presence means that Hibiki will not be alone in trying to protect the task force against prowling submarines. These are known to be operating in the sea lanes between Truk and Japan and should present the only danger facing the ships as they try to get home.

---

In the engine rooms Sakati’s men have a spring in their step as the order comes down to bring the engines up to speed. The helmsman and the rest of the bridge crew respond smartly to Captain Ishii’s orders as he cons the ship out of the anchorage. On deck sailors perform their duties with crisp efficiency. Even the lookouts seem to be more alert than usual.

This crew has traveled a long way in the last thirteen months. They were at the savage battle for Wake Island and have gone on successful raiding missions far south of the equator. They have participated in the long and difficult campaign at Timor and faced defeat at Exmouth off the Australian coast. They have sailed four times into the teeth of the enemy at Gili Gili and survived. Now, at long last, they are on the mission they have been waiting for. Hibiki and her crew are going home.





Cuttlefish -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (11/5/2007 10:01:45 PM)

July 1, 1943

Location: 300 miles south-southeast of Guam
Course: North
Attached to: TF 36
Mission: Surface Combat
System Damage: 3
Float Damage: 0
Fires: 0
Fuel: 425

Orders: Proceed to Okayama for refit

---

In the forward crew’s mess:

“Extensive refit? What does that mean?”

“Send some of that pineapple down this way, will you?”

“I don’t know. Maybe they’re going to give us 8” guns and turn us into a cruiser.”

“That’s stupid. This ship would roll right over.”

“I know that, idiot! I was making a joke. Hey, here’s Oizuma, make some room.”

“Snake Man! How is our favorite serpent doing today?”

“Hey, everyone. She’s fine, she had a rat yesterday and she will probably sleep most of the way to Japan.”

“Have you heard anything about the refit work?”

“Not a thing. Someone was saying they thought we might get new engines, new designs that would let us do 40 knots.”

“I don’t know about the ship, but as soon as I get home I am having an extensive refit done too.”

“Ha! With your equipment? Your wife has probably already ordered something larger and newer from the shipyards. You’re going on the scrap heap.”

“Who took my chopsticks?”

“At least I have a wife! I will already be in port while you are sailing around looking for a place to drop your anchor.”

“With an anchor like mine…”

“Hey, did you guys hear? I heard from an ensign that we’re getting some fancy new radar gear, better than anything the enemy has. We’ll be able to see a torpedo boat coming from twenty miles away.”

“I don’t care what they are doing, as long as it takes some time.”

“Someone tell the cook we need more yams.”





Capt. Harlock -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (11/5/2007 10:28:26 PM)


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ORIGINAL: Cuttlefish

“Hey, did you guys hear? I heard from an ensign that we’re getting some fancy new radar gear, better than anything the enemy has. We’ll be able to see a torpedo boat coming from twenty miles away.”



Classic scuttlebutt. (but wouldn't the crew of the Hibiki be talking in terms of kilometers?)[;)]




Cuttlefish -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (11/5/2007 11:19:48 PM)


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ORIGINAL: Capt. Harlock


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ORIGINAL: Cuttlefish

“Hey, did you guys hear? I heard from an ensign that we’re getting some fancy new radar gear, better than anything the enemy has. We’ll be able to see a torpedo boat coming from twenty miles away.”



Classic scuttlebutt. (but wouldn't the crew of the Hibiki be talking in terms of kilometers?)[;)]



Yeah, but...you see...well, yeah.

For those readers who demand verisimilitude, or who live in a country not burdened with a completely illogical system of weights and measures, feel free to read the line in question as "we'll be able to see a torpedo boat coming from thirty-two point one eight six eight eight kilometers away."





Japanese_Spirit -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (11/5/2007 11:38:36 PM)

I actually did read Japan only partially converted to Metric and actually kept delaying the full adoption until the U.S occupied Japan in 1945. They used their own system until then and there was disgruntlement at the full adoption.

Kind of like how it is today although I don't think you can really beat the good ole Imperial, though. [;)] Miles just sounds so much more nicer, as does feet, then Kilometres, etc.




kaleun -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (11/5/2007 11:43:15 PM)

Don't they still measure square footage in tatamis?




Cuttlefish -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (11/6/2007 10:00:37 PM)

July 2, 1943

Location: 100 miles southeast of Guam
Course: North
Attached to: TF 36
Mission: Surface Combat
System Damage: 3
Float Damage: 0
Fires: 0
Fuel: 396

Orders: Proceed to Okayama for refit

---

It’s been a while since I have done this, so while Hibiki journeys north let’s catch up with who is who in this AAR. Of the people in this list only Captain Ishii, Richard Marson, and the last man on the list are historical figures. All the others are entirely fictional creations. This is far from a complete list of everyone who has appeared in the AAR, but it includes the ones most likely to appear again.

Officers:

Lieutenant Commander Hagumu Ishii, Captain. We know quite a bit about his character but little of his home life, except that he is from Hyogo Prefecture and has a granddaughter, Sachiko, who he has never seen.

Lieutenant Sakamoto Miharu, Executive Officer. His home is in Kanazawa. Taught Japanese at Annapolis for a year in the 1930’s.

Lieutenant Sakati, Chief Engineer. Trained at the University of Glasgow in Scotland.

Lieutenant Sugiyura, Chief Torpedo Officer. Martial artist and the most aggressive of Hibiki’s officers.

Lieutenant JG Kuwaki, Chief Gunnery Officer.

Lieutenant JG Nakagawa, ship’s medical officer.

Lieutenant JG Kataoka, paymaster.

Ensign Handa, small boat specialist. His war of practical jokes with Ensign Izu got out of hand for a while, but the two are now good friends.

Ensign Tomio Izu. Amateur ornithologist, his father is a colonel in the Kwangtung Army.

Petty Officers:

Chief Petty Officer Shun. From Okinawa. Terror of the ship’s enlisted men. He and Captain Ishii go back a long ways.

Senior Petty Officer Toshio Aikawa. Appears in the narrative only rarely, but Shun respects him.

Petty Officer First Class Okubo. A bully.

Petty Officer Second Class Taiki Takahashi. Began the war as an enlisted man. Remarkably intelligent. Has lost much of his naïveté during the war but not his sense of honor.

Enlisted Men:

Leading Seaman Riku Ariga. A former rogue and con man who is trying very hard to reform after having the bad luck to fall hopelessly in love with Shun’s daughter.

Seaman First Class Shiro Kuramata. A woodcarver and gentle soul from Tendo. Close friend to Riku and Taiki. We know he will one day write a book about his experiences during the war.

Seaman First Class Oizuma, “Snake Man.” Owner of Benzaiten.

Seaman First Class Yoshitake. Bunks with Shiro, Riku, and Oizuma.

Seaman First Class Hikaru Shoji. Another bunkmate of Riku and Shiro’s, is plagued by questionable judgment and resulting bad luck.

Others:

Kojima Miharu, Lieutenant Miharu’s wife.

Morito Miharu, the lieutenant’s brother. A member of the Communist Party, which is a criminal activity in and of itself. Escaped the police but with a bullet wound, nursed back to health by Kojima.

Rin Shun, CPO Shun’s mother. A wise old woman, recently seriously ill but recovering.

Nanami Shun, CPO Shun’s daughter. Beautiful but fiercely protected by her father.

Ensign Noboro Takahashi, Taiki’s brother. Serves aboard battleship Mutsu. Injured off Wake in ’42, has burn scars as a result.

Benzaiten, a Borneo blood python. The ship’s unofficial good luck charm.

Lieutenant Umeda of the Tokeitai. Tossed into Tokyo Bay by Shun, last seen exiled to Burma.

Frank Barnwell of the RAF, Blenheim gunner and radio operator. Picked up by Hibiki when his plane was shot down in the early days of the war. Escaped and after many adventures is now in India with his unit.

Lieutenant Colonel Richard Marson of the Australian 7th Infantry Division. His battalion escaped the Timor disaster and is about to make another appearance.

Gordon McNair, merchant seaman. His tanker was torpedoed and he was left adrift by Kido Butai off New Zealand.

Ensign Mark Turnby of PT-62, son of a friend of Lieutenant Miharu’s. Rescued by Hibiki and now on his way to Japan as a prisoner of war.

Jack, torpedo boat commander. Captured along with Ensign Turnby and also on his way to Japan.





kaleun -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (11/6/2007 11:53:50 PM)

Thanks. A dramatis personae; very appreciated.




cantona2 -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (11/7/2007 12:37:47 AM)

Nice summary.

My favourite has to be:

Benzaiten, a Borneo blood python. The ship’s unofficial good luck charm.




Cuttlefish -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (11/7/2007 1:42:20 AM)

July 3, 1943

Location: 60 miles north-northeast of Saipan
Course: North
Attached to: TF 36
Mission: Surface Combat
System Damage: 3
Float Damage: 0
Fires: 0
Fuel: 368

Orders: Proceed to Okayama for refit

---

“So what will you do when you get leave?” Riku asks Shiro. “Go home to Tendo?” Shiro sets down the heavy magazine of 25 mm ammunition he is stowing before answering.

“Yes,” he says. “I miss my family. What about you?” Riku shrugs. He finishes counting the magazines and makes a note on his clipboard.

“I don’t know,” he answers. “I may just stay around the ship. There is going to be a lot of work to do.” Shiro looks at him.

“That is not the man I know!” he says. “Though come to think of it, I never have known you to go home on leave. You’ve usually had, well, other things to keep you occupied.”

“They do not miss me at home,” says Riku. “I am the seventh of eight children, so I do not even have the distinction of being the pampered youngest.” He pauses for a moment. “I know some women in Okayama from our last stay there. I think several of them would be very glad to see me. But I do not think I will be making any visits this time.”

“Ah,” says Shiro sympathetically. “I think I understand.” In truth he is not sure whether Riku is going to remain aboard ship because he honestly wants nothing to do with his former activities or because he wants to avoid temptation. Either way it is an indication of how much he has changed.

Shiro also wonders briefly about Riku’s family. He has never heard Riku say much about them. He knows Riku is from Tokushima Prefecture on Shikoku, but that is about all he knows. And Shiro is too polite to pry.

“Come on,” says Riku. “We need to finish this.” He and Shiro continue their work, and the subject of leave is dropped for the time being.





Cuttlefish -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (11/7/2007 1:44:01 AM)

July 4, 1943

Location: 300 miles north of Saipan
Course: North
Attached to: TF 36
Mission: Surface Combat
System Damage: 3
Float Damage: 0
Fires: 0
Fuel: 339

Orders: Proceed to Okayama for refit

---

“So what will you do when you get leave?” Ensign Handa asks. The two men are in the officer’s wardroom. Ensign Izu drops down into a chair across the small table from him, holding a cup of tea against the rocking of the ship with practiced proficiency.

“Go see my mother and my sisters,” says Izu. “One of my sisters is getting married. To a dentist. They are just waiting for Father to get leave to schedule the ceremony. It would be nice if that happened while I was home.”

“A dentist?” says Handa. “Always nice to have one of those in the family.”

“I imagine he is a dull fellow,” says Izu. “He is very old, almost thirty. His first wife died a couple of years ago. My sister writes that he fell in love with her while filling one of her cavities.” Handa thinks for a moment of making the obvious joke, but decides against it. Men can be very touchy where their sister’s honor is concerned. “What about you?” Izu asks. “Will you be going home?”

“For a few days, at least,” says Handa. “I may do a little hiking. After so many months aboard ship I feel a need to get away from people for a bit. And,” he adds wryly, “I’m pretty sure that I won’t find any eels in my backpack while visiting the Iwaki waterfalls.” Ensign Izu laughs.

“I’ve never seen them,” he says. “Are they as beautiful as people say?”

“They’re hideous creatures,” says Handa. “And don’t deny it, I know it was you.”

“No, you idiot, I meant the waterfalls!” Izu says. Handa smiles.

“Yes they are,” he says. “And very soothing to the spirit.”

“I think we all could use a bit of that, after the last year,” says Izu, sipping his tea.

“Yes we could,” says Ensign Handa.





Cuttlefish -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (11/7/2007 1:45:57 AM)

July 5, 1943

Location: 100 miles south of Iwo Jima
Course: North
Attached to: TF 36
Mission: Surface Combat
System Damage: 3
Float Damage: 0
Fires: 0
Fuel: 311

Orders: Proceed to Okayama for refit

---

Around mid-morning dreams of home are forgotten for a time as the war suddenly catches up with Hibiki once again. Captain Ishii is in the chart room when a yell from a lookout brings him running onto the bridge. Back in the column destroyer Okikaze has suddenly heeled violently to starboard.

“Getting a signal from them now,” says Lieutenant Sugiyura, glasses trained aft. “They are running up a flag…sir, they are under torpedo attack!”

Aboard Hibiki they wait tensely, but there is no explosion. It will turn out later that Okikaze spotted four torpedo wakes. All missed the ship, although one passed within 40 meters of the turning destroyer’s bow. Okikaze and Akebono search for the lurking submarine without success and then rejoin the column.

The warships hurry north. They will leave this submarine behind, but there are probably others ahead. Japan is still several days away. The attack comes as a stark reminder that they are not home yet, and must remain alert if they are to reach Okayama safely.





Onime No Kyo -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (11/7/2007 1:59:56 AM)

I wonder if Oizuma plans to take the snake on leave.




Cuttlefish -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (11/8/2007 3:10:03 AM)

July 6, 1943

Location: 120 miles north of Iwo Jima
Course: North
Attached to: TF 36
Mission: Surface Combat
System Damage: 3
Float Damage: 0
Fires: 0
Fuel: 282

Orders: Proceed to Okayama for refit

---

The task force encounters another submarine the next day. This one, however, is Japanese. Lookouts spot it running on the surface ahead of the task force, heading southeast, and its friendly identity is quickly established. It is I-124.

Captain Ishii scrutinizes the submarine through a pair of the big 21 cm binoculars. It is about 100’ shorter than his own vessel. It looks trim and lethal, and as he watches it Ishii becomes aware that his feelings are much different than they would be if he was watching another kind of Japanese warship.

Looking at the submarine leaves him feeling vaguely resentful. He knows that this is foolishness. Submarines are valuable tools of war, and the men aboard I-124 are his comrades in arms as much as the crews of the destroyers in the column behind him. Yet as a destroyer man he has spent too much time being stalked by submarines to be fond even of those on his side. He cannot help thinking of them as anything but a skulking menace.

Still, he wishes them well as he steps away from the binoculars. I-124 is a Type KRS boat, so it is probably on its way to lay mines. Judging from its course Ishii thinks somewhere east of the Marshalls is probably the target, perhaps Midway, Canton Island, or Palmyra. Ishii does not care much for mines, either, but he knows that is also sentimental foolishness. This is war, not some duel of honor between two samurai. And in war the only thing that counts is killing the other man before he kills you, with whatever tools are at your disposal.

Knowing this does not make him like submarines any better, though.




TAIL GUNNER -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (11/8/2007 4:44:09 AM)

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"My sister writes that he fell in love with her while filling one of her cavities.” Handa thinks for a moment of making the obvious joke, but decides against it.


That's too freakin' funny![:D]




Cuttlefish -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (11/8/2007 11:43:35 PM)

July 7, 1943

Location: 290 miles south of Osaka
Course: North
Attached to: TF 36
Mission: Surface Combat
System Damage: 3
Float Damage: 0
Fires: 0
Fuel: 254

Orders: Proceed to Okayama for refit

---

Taiki finds himself looking down at the top of Hibiki’s rangefinder. This is not a common view, but at the moment he and Seaman Shoji are up on the tripod mast above and behind the tower. They are tightening the cable leading back to the rear mast. Not too tight, it is good to leave some slack in the cable, but the constant vibration of the ship from the sea and her own engines tends to loosen things over time.

Taiki enjoys being up above the ship. He is standing on a strut, one arm wrapped around a beam, enjoying the view. Shoji is obviously less comfortable so high above the deck and keeps glancing nervously down.

“Give it a couple more turns and then we’re done up here,” Taiki tells him.

“Hai, Petty Officer,” mutters Shoji. “Good.” He gives the wrench another turn. He does not like heights, and his hands are a little clammy. At least the hand stung by the cone snail back in Rabaul no longer pains him. It did for several weeks.

On the next turn he loses his grip on the wrench. He grabs for it, but then sways on the strut he is standing on and instead grabs the vertical beam with both hands.

“Heads up below!” calls Taiki in alarm. The wrench is heavy. He watches it plummet downward. As it passes the small platform midway up the mast a hand shoots out and snags it. Taiki finds himself looking down at the upturned face of Petty Officer Shun, who is standing on the platform.

Shun says nothing, but with an effortless flip he tosses the wrench upward once again. It reaches the top of its arc right in front of Taiki and he plucks it neatly out of the air and hands it back to Shoji.

“Finish the job,” he says sternly. “And without dropping it on anybody’s head this time.” Shoji, his face pale, nods and does so. The two men climb down to the platform.

“You are dismissed, Shoji,” Taiki says. “Thank you for your assistance.” Shoji nods, glances nervously at Shun, then climbs the rest of the way down. The two petty officers are left on the platform.

“That was a very nice catch, Chief,” Taiki says respectfully. “Thank you.” Shun makes a dismissive gesture.

“Thought that might happen,” he says. “Shoji has two left thumbs.” He pauses. “Saw a man get brained once by a hammer dropped off a crane,” he says. “The man lived, but after the accident he could only make noises that sounded like a sand piper. Couldn’t talk at all.”

“That’s terrible!” says Taiki. Shun shrugs.

“For him it was an improvement,” he says. There is a moment of silence. Taiki waits. He doubts Shun has climbed up here on the off chance that Shoji would drop something. After a moment Shun speaks.

“We will be back in Japan soon,” he says. Taiki does not reply to this perfectly obvious statement. After a moment Shun continues. “You have met my daughter,” he says. Taiki is stunned. Of all the things he expected Shun to mention, this was the last.

“Yes, Chief,” is all he manages to say. Shun nods.

“She and my mother will be visiting me in Okayama before I go on leave and we return home,” Shun says. “I will not be free at all times. My mother has been ill, and may not have the energy to accompany her everywhere.” Taiki listens, unable to fathom where this is going.

“My daughter can not of course go about unaccompanied,” Shun says. “If you would consider being her escort on occasion I would consider it a favor.”

“Me, Chief?” Taiki says. He cannot keep the surprise out of his voice. Shun looks at him.

“You are an intelligent and personable young man,” he says gravely. “And my daughter knows you. Most of all, you have a sense of duty and honor. With you I would feel she was…safe.”

Taiki winces inwardly. Nanami Shun is undoubtedly charming and beautiful, but for many reasons Taiki would rather walk on hot coals than accept this charge. For one thing, he has no illusions about what Shun would do if anything were to happen to his daughter while she was with Taiki. For another, he can only imagine Riku’s reaction to this. Last of all, part of him resents being the “safe” one, the one even someone as protective as Shun can trust his daughter with.

There can, however, be no thought of refusing.

“Of course, Chief Shun,” he says. “As my duties permit I will be happy to be of what assistance I can.”

“Very good,” Shun says. “Thank you.” He gives Taiki a nod and climbs down the mast to the deck. Taiki stands for a moment looking down at the deck of the destroyer without really seeing anything.

“Oh ****,” he finally says.





Onime No Kyo -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (11/9/2007 12:39:47 AM)

ROFL [:D]

There have been some uncomfortable situations, but this one tops them all.




tocaff -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (11/9/2007 2:17:37 AM)

So liberty promises to be intersting......




Cuttlefish -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (11/9/2007 3:31:49 AM)

July 8, 1943

Location: 60 miles southwest of Osaka
Course: North
Attached to: TF 36
Mission: Surface Combat
System Damage: 3
Float Damage: 0
Fires: 0
Fuel: 225

Orders: Proceed to Okayama for refit

---

A pair of birds skim the surface of the ocean. As the bow of the destroyer approaches they veer to the side with marvelous agility and fly away, seeking a more peaceful area in which to look for fish.

“Almost home,” says Ensign Izu happily, watching the birds. Lieutenant Miharu looks over at him.

“What was that, Ensign?” he says.

“Your pardon, sir,” says Izu. He indicates the birds. “Those are wedge-tailed shearwaters. They breed on little islands off the Kii Peninsula and don’t usually get too far from shore.”

“Ah,” says the lieutenant. “Yes, we should reach Okayama by tomorrow morning.” He raises his binoculars and looks at the departing birds for a moment. “Birds have been telling sailors they were getting close to land for as long as men have been going to sea,” he says. “Now we have all sorts of modern ways of knowing just where we are, but it is still good to see a tangible sign that we are almost home.”

“Land in sight!” calls a lookout. “Japan ahead!” The land, as yet visible only through binoculars, is Shiono Point, the tip of the Kii Peninsula and the southernmost location in Honshu. Mt. Koya will soon be visible. Hibiki and the other ships will pass the Kii Peninsula to the west as they make their way into the Inland Sea.

Cheering can be heard from around the ship. Lieutenant Miharu smiles.

“Ah,” he says, “the gentle bellow of the leave-bound sailor. Another tangible sign we are almost home.”


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histgamer -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (11/9/2007 9:14:03 PM)

I haven't been on the forums much since last spring but I remembered how great this AAR started out to be and I decided to try to catch up, since last night I have read from roughly page 20-47 now and I am floored by the way this amazing quality writing and story weaving has simply gotten better and better each day.

P.S. Due to the epic scope of this it would make a much better TV series than a movie or you could lengthen certain days to work it into a alternative history book sortta like Newtt did with his 3 book series about Gettysburg and what happened after a CSA victory there.

Seriously your writing is that good that you could be very successful off this.




Capt. Harlock -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (11/9/2007 10:22:45 PM)


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ORIGINAL: Onime No Kyo

ROFL [:D]

There have been some uncomfortable situations, but this one tops them all.


I second the motion! This is going to be something to watch. . . [sm=00000613.gif]




histgamer -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (11/10/2007 5:08:38 AM)

Damnit I am fully caught up now and I am left in suspense... ahhhhhhhhhhh[&:]


Oh and with the PDF thing whenever this is over I would love to get a copy as well, ideally autographed :)




Onime No Kyo -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (11/10/2007 5:43:33 AM)


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ORIGINAL: flanyboy

Damnit I am fully caught up now and I am left in suspense... ahhhhhhhhhhh[&:]


Oh and with the PDF thing whenever this is over I would love to get a copy as well, ideally autographed :)



Ha! A good half of the previous 56 pages are people griping about withdrawal. Welcome aboard. [:)]




Cuttlefish -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (11/10/2007 8:10:00 AM)


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ORIGINAL: flanyboy

Damnit I am fully caught up now and I am left in suspense... ahhhhhhhhhhh[&:]

Oh and with the PDF thing whenever this is over I would love to get a copy as well, ideally autographed :)



Thanks for the kind words earlier, and glad you enjoyed getting caught up. As far as being in suspense, that's one of the interesting things about writing this - the author is in suspense right along with everyone else.




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