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Cuttlefish -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (5/13/2008 8:52:41 PM)


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ORIGINAL: Mike Solli

Cuttlefish, when the war (and AAR) are over, will you be so kind as to let us know what the future holds for those who survive the war?  You know we'll have to know.


I will be doing some kind of epilogue along those lines for sure. We've come too far with this crew not to at least get a glimpse into what happens to them after the war.




Mike Solli -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (5/13/2008 8:54:09 PM)

Excellent.  Thanks CF. [:D]




cantona2 -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (5/13/2008 9:56:22 PM)


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ORIGINAL: Terminus

Taiki seems to be taking an... unorthodox approach to his position as nakodo...[:D]


Right out the Shun school of interpersonal interaction [:D]




Cuttlefish -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (5/14/2008 1:38:28 AM)

February 2, 1944

Location: Tokyo
Course: None
Attached to: Disbanded in port
Mission: None
System Damage: 0
Float Damage: 0
Fires: 0
Fuel: 475

Orders: Await further orders.

---

There is no further work to be done on Hibiki and the berth is needed, so Chief Engineer Sakati and his men light the boilers. Bringing up steam in a cold system requires a careful touch – too much heat too quickly can cause damage – but Sakati and his men are experienced at the job and within a couple of hours Hibiki is operating on her own power once again.

The destroyer moves out into the bay and takes up position at the end of a row of about a dozen other destroyers. The crew is back to full strength, the last of the sick men having recently been cleared to return to duty, so now it is just a matter of waiting for new orders. These could come in a day, or next week, or next month. It all depends on the vagaries of war and the whim of the Imperial Japanese Navy.

---

Kojima Miharu and her husband walk through a park in Tokyo. Kojima’s eyes are red but she is no longer crying. Instead she holds Lieutenant Miharu’s arm as they walk, lost in thought.

“The last thing I ever told him was not to come back,” she says at last. Her husband stops walking and turns her to face him.

“None of what happened was your fault,” he says. “Morito made his own choices and suffered his own consequences. You meant him no ill when you told him that, and I think he knew it.”

Kojima nods, though her face is still somber. She looks at the cherry tree growing next to the path beside them. Its branches stretch overhead, bare shapes between them and the gray winter sky.

“I am glad Mr. Shun and his family are all right,” she says. “His mother must be a remarkable woman. I should like to meet her some day.”

“They are in town,” says Lieutenant Miharu. “Young Mr. Ariga’s courtship is proceeding at last.”

“Good!” says his wife with a faint smile. “It is good to hear about new beginnings. I have heard too much about death lately.”

Her husband draws her closer. “I’m afraid that will not change soon,” he says gently. “This war is a long ways from over.”




FeurerKrieg -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (5/14/2008 2:13:09 AM)

So, CF, with this high standard of writing, do you ever ind yourself taking forever on a post since maybe you are worried it isn't good enough? Your standards have improved steadily over the course of this epic and I wonder if you ever have a tough time keeping the bar so high.

As always - great job!!




kaleun -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (5/14/2008 2:33:10 AM)

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So, CF, with this high standard of writing, do you ever ind yourself taking forever on a post since maybe you are worried it isn't good enough? Your standards have improved steadily over the course of this epic and I wonder if you ever have a tough time keeping the bar so high.



AKA writer's block.

Outstanding work cuttlefish.

And IMHO you are entitled to as many episodes of writer's block as you need.

Unfortunately I have neglected all other AARs for this one.[8|]




Cuttlefish -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (5/14/2008 3:26:31 AM)


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ORIGINAL: Feurer Krieg

So, CF, with this high standard of writing, do you ever ind yourself taking forever on a post since maybe you are worried it isn't good enough? Your standards have improved steadily over the course of this epic and I wonder if you ever have a tough time keeping the bar so high.

As always - great job!!



Oh yeah. I write a lot of stuff that never makes the cut. Sometimes I can salvage it by writing it a different way, sometimes I have to scrap it and start completely over. Sometimes when I read something I just wrote I think "Wow, this sucks." I don't run into a lot of classic writer's block, but I do have a hard time making some ideas work.

Maybe I should have saved some of the worst stuff and used it for a "bloopers" section at the end of the AAR. Then again, maybe not. I still wince when I think about the scene with Ensign Handa and the gorilla.




Onime No Kyo -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (5/14/2008 3:48:33 AM)

I'm almost afraid to ask. Almost.....




kaleun -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (5/14/2008 4:34:33 AM)

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I'm almost afraid to ask. Almost.....



Oh, go ahead; you know you want to...[;)]




gladiatt -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (5/14/2008 5:32:35 PM)


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ORIGINAL: Capt. Harlock

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“It’s the name,” he says. “Benzaiten is a lucky goddess. She is connected to the sea and to snakes and dragons.” He stops and looks at the executive officer. Miharu shakes his head, not understanding. Shun’s expression doesn’t change, but Miharu gets the impression Shun thinks he is being dense.

“Hiryu,” says Shun, and suddenly the lieutenant understands.

“Flying dragon,” he says. “You think that if I order the snake killed and the carrier sinks…”

“Then people will say it’s because we killed the snake, yes sir,” finishes Shun.


I am impressed still more [&o] [&o]. You've clearly done an extraordinary amount of research on this!


Still nearly a year late to read, but i can't stop reading this AAR. I agree with Capt.Harlock; we must all bow to your imagination, research, sense of drama, humor, and good description of a great number of character. It sound like real life. Even events coming from the game (Hiryu trying to reach Tjilitjap and fighting against the whole ocean) with a great sense of suspens, it sound like it was made just to be a great TALE !!!
Congratulations !




Dave3L -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (5/14/2008 10:42:32 PM)

Sooooo......


What about Ens. Handa and the gorilla?




Capt. Harlock -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (5/14/2008 11:01:08 PM)

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There is no further work to be done on Hibiki and the berth is needed, so Chief Engineer Sakati and his men light the boilers. Bringing up steam in a cold system requires a careful touch – too much heat too quickly can cause damage – but Sakati and his men are experienced at the job and within a couple of hours Hibiki is operating on her own power once again.


Something I'm not 100% certain about but which might be of interest. I've read that in Royal Navy destroyers, they preferred to operate with only some of the boilers lit, to save wear and tear. The 'black gang' is thus immediately able to tell the difference between drills and the real thing: when the call comes down to light all boilers, action is imminent.




Cuttlefish -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (5/15/2008 3:13:12 AM)


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ORIGINAL: gladiatt

Still nearly a year late to read, but i can't stop reading this AAR. I agree with Capt.Harlock; we must all bow to your imagination, research, sense of drama, humor, and good description of a great number of character. It sound like real life. Even events coming from the game (Hiryu trying to reach Tjilitjap and fighting against the whole ocean) with a great sense of suspens, it sound like it was made just to be a great TALE !!!
Congratulations !


Glad you are enjoying getting caught up!

quote:

ORIGINAL: Dave3L

Sooooo......

What about Ens. Handa and the gorilla?


Thinking about it I seem to remember that I had to change it from a gorilla to an orangutan because orangutans are native to the DEI and gorillas are not. It was still a bad idea, though.


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Cuttlefish -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (5/15/2008 3:16:09 AM)

February 3, 1944

Location: Tokyo
Course: None
Attached to: Disbanded in port
Mission: None
System Damage: 0
Float Damage: 0
Fires: 0
Fuel: 475

Orders: Await further orders.

---

The sun has come out and sunlight dances off the low swells in Tokyo Bay as Ensign Izu pilots one of the ship’s boats towards a dock. While the weather is warm enough to melt the recent snow it is still chilly, around 4 degrees C.

There are three passengers in the boat. Two of them, Lieutenant Miharu and Petty Officer Takahashi, sit calmly. The third, Riku Ariga, sits facing rigidly forward. His hands are gripping the bench seat so hard his knuckles are white.

“It is good your wife can be here for this,” Lieutenant Miharu tells Taiki. “And I imagine you are looking forward to seeing her anyway.”

“Yes sir,” says Taiki. He glances over at Riku. “And if Ariga here remains catatonic throughout the meeting I will be glad of her help in keeping the conversation going.” Riku does not show any sign of having heard.

“A nakodo’s job is never easy,” says the lieutenant with a laugh. “But you seem to be doing well.”

Taiki sighs. His task today is to supervise the first formal meeting between Riku and Nanami Shun. Ordinarily the prospective couple would be meeting for the first time and would get to know each other and decide if they want to marry. That would seem to be a foregone conclusion in this case, but Taiki knows it is important to observe the proper forms, for Chief Shun’s sake if for no other reason.

As the boat approaches the pier two women can be seen waiting. One is a small woman of delicate beauty, formally wrapped in a warm and beautifully embroidered kimono. The other is a tall and striking woman dressed in a western-style coat and monpe, the pantaloons increasingly favored by Japanese working women. The two women are standing close together and talking animatedly with one another. The men in the boat can hear a great deal of laughter as they get closer. Kojima Miharu is giggling, her hand over her mouth, while Sayumi Takahashi has her head back and is laughing out loud.

“Ah,” says the lieutenant, “it seems our wives are well on their way to becoming friends.”

“I wonder what they find so funny?” Taiki asks.

“Take it from an old married man,” says Lieutenant Miharu. “Sometimes it’s better not to know.”

---

Considerably later in the day:

“Hey, he’s back!” says Shiro as Riku appears in the doorway to their bunk area. Riku steps inside, expertly weaving his head around some pipes. The others gather around him.

“How did it go?” says Oizuma.

Riku smiles. “It was wonderful,” he says. “Though I admit it got off to a bad start. I couldn’t talk! There she was at last, sitting right across the table from me, and at first I could not say a word.”

“To think this is the man who used to have a woman in every port,” says Yoshitake. “Two or three women in some of them.”

“No more, my friend,” says Riku.

“What happened?” asks Shiro. “Were you finally able to find your voice?”

Riku nods. “It was Mrs. Takahashi’s doing,” he says. “She and Takahashi kept trying to get me to say something. I guess Mrs. Takahashi ran out of patience, because she stabbed me under the table with a fork! Right in the thigh, it hurt like hell.”

The men laugh uproariously. “And that snapped you out of it?” Shoji asks after the mirth dies down.

Riku nods. ”Oh yes. I yelled, then I had to pretend I had a cramp. But that got things going. After that Miss Shun and I could not stop talking. It was wonderful.”

“What happens next?” Shiro asks.

“Takahashi and Shun will decide when the wedding occurs,” says Riku. “It will be later, when we know we will be in port for a while. We could be sent out again any time, now.” He eyes get a glazed look as his thoughts obviously revert to the day just past. “Ah, what a day it was,” he says. He looks so goofily happy that the other men exchange amused glances.

“Do you want to rig your hammock tonight, Ariga,” Oizuma asks him dryly, “or are you just going to float?”





Onime No Kyo -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (5/15/2008 3:26:25 AM)

Riku would hardly be amiss by leaving Benzaiten a little something. [:)]




Dave3L -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (5/15/2008 2:38:03 PM)


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ORIGINAL: Cuttlefish



Thinking about it I seem to remember that I had to change it from a gorilla to an orangutan because orangutans are native to the DEI and gorillas are not. It was still a bad idea, though.




Sooooooo....

What about Ens. Handa and the orangutan?




(Actually, CF, although I have been a lurker, I must add my approbation to your AAR. Your style is good, and your story even better. Kudos!)




AcePylut -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (5/15/2008 4:55:32 PM)

I kinda hope Riku dies.  Might be a good way to show the cost of warfare. 





tocaff -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (5/15/2008 5:06:08 PM)

Once married to Shun's daughter he will have the omnipotent protection that it will bring.




Cuttlefish -> RE: Small Ship, Big War - Interlude (5/15/2008 8:57:00 PM)

February 4 - February 17, 1944

Location: Tokyo
Course: None
Attached to: Disbanded in port
Mission: None
System Damage: 0
Float Damage: 0
Fires: 0
Fuel: 475

Orders: Await further orders.

---

Recent events give way to days of calm aboard Hibiki. The crew is healthy and the destroyer is ready for action, but no new orders come in. The war in the Pacific is also in a period of calm. Not only are there no fresh Allied attacks, but their forces are keeping a low profile. No one mistakes this to mean they have gone away. To the Japanese high command, rather, this lull has an ominous feel to it.

China is also quiet, with both sides seemingly reluctant to open any fresh offensives there. Farther south the Southern Resource Area drowses in sleepy tropical calm. Word comes of renewed fierce fighting in Burma, however, with the British launching a fresh offensive against Mandalay. Japanese radio and newspapers confidently predict that these new attacks will meet with no more success than previous efforts.

The quiet days slip by for Hibiki’s crew. It is a welcome respite. Wives and families of many of the crewmen come to the Tokyo area to be nearby. The crew does routine maintenance, plays cards and shogi, and speculates endlessly on when and where the next battle will take place. Captain Ishii wishes he could get the baseball team together again but the winter weather in Tokyo is not suitable for playing ball.

Battleship Mutsu arrives in Japan for a refit following an extended stay in the Kuriles and Taiki gets to spend some time with his brother Noboro. Riku goes to nearby Kawasaki POW Camp 2-B to visit Jack and Ensign Turnby and finds that they are still in relatively good health. The prison official that he and Lieutenant Miharu are paying is taking good care of his nest eggs.

This period of calm comes to an abrupt end on February 17 when Hibiki receives orders directing her to make ready to sail and placing her in Task Force 33 under the command of Captain Shiro Shibuya. Rumor spreads like wildfire across the harbor and word quickly reaches Hibiki of what is going on. Powerful enemy forces have been spotted approaching Woleai atoll in the Caroline Islands. The quiet time is over. Hibiki is back in the war.





kaleun -> RE: Small Ship, Big War - Interlude (5/15/2008 9:29:32 PM)

Opening fanfare from "Victory at Sea" sounds.[sm=00000613.gif]




Capt. Harlock -> RE: Small Ship, Big War - Interlude (5/15/2008 10:34:28 PM)


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ORIGINAL: Cuttlefish


Battleship Mutsu arrives in Japan for a refit following an extended stay in the Kuriles and Taiki gets to spend some time with his brother Noboro.

This period of calm comes to an abrupt end on February 17 when Hibiki receives orders directing her to make ready to sail and placing her in Task Force 33 under the command of Captain Shiro Shibuya. Rumor spreads like wildfire across the harbor and word quickly reaches Hibiki of what is going on. Powerful enemy forces have been spotted approaching Woleai atoll in the Caroline Islands. The quiet time is over. Hibiki is back in the war.



Things don't look promising for the IJN. With Yamato and Musashi in the body-and-fender shop, and Mutsu undergoing refit, the Sons of the Emperor are a quart low on both flattops and battlewagons.




Durbik -> RE: Small Ship, Big War - Interlude (5/16/2008 9:28:50 AM)

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Captain Shiro Shibuya


Well, I should associate this with the area in Japan, but there's a karaoke show on some polish music tv named like this - and a rather embarassing one.

Hope Hibiki won't be singing false tunes under cpt. Shibuya [:D]




vettim89 -> RE: Small Ship, Big War - Interlude (5/16/2008 8:12:16 PM)

I fear for the non-combatant members of our cast of characters. I notice the date and know that somewhere to the east there are squadrons of B-29's being assembled waiting for a base to wreak havoc upon the HI. That and the fact that the Shun's live on Okinawa brings me no comfort




FeurerKrieg -> RE: Small Ship, Big War - Interlude (5/16/2008 8:22:38 PM)

If the Allies land on Okinawa, they will lose the war for sure. Shun's mother alone will hold up a couple of divisions.




Cuttlefish -> RE: Small Ship, Big War - Interlude (5/16/2008 8:38:41 PM)


quote:

ORIGINAL: Durbik

quote:

Captain Shiro Shibuya


Well, I should associate this with the area in Japan, but there's a karaoke show on some polish music tv named like this - and a rather embarassing one.

Hope Hibiki won't be singing false tunes under cpt. Shibuya [:D]



Captain Shibuya was, historically, the commander first of CL Abukuma and then CA Nachi. He was later the commander of the 101st Escort Group, where he was killed in action aboard CL Kashii in Jan. 1945. He was postumously promoted to Vice-Admiral.




Durbik -> RE: Small Ship, Big War - Interlude (5/17/2008 12:06:49 AM)

Yes, I checked that after your post - but reminder of the karaoke show still's present :D




Cuttlefish -> RE: Small Ship, Big War - Interlude (5/17/2008 4:14:22 AM)

February 18, 1944

Location: 100 miles east-southeast of Tori Shima
Course: South
Attached to: TF 33
Mission: Surface Combat
System Damage: 0
Float Damage: 0
Fires: 0
Fuel: 432

Orders: Proceed to Saipan

---

Task Force 33 consists of two light cruisers, Isuzu and Sendai, and eight destroyers. The ships leave early in the morning with orders to proceed to Saipan. What the plan is beyond this, or even if there is a plan, no one aboard Hibiki knows, not even Captain Ishii.

The ships form two columns, with Hibiki the trailing ship in the starboard column. Captain Shibuya has his flag in Isuzu. Hibiki’s crew has mixed feelings about this. They are fond of Isuzu, having accompanied the old light cruiser more than once. On the other hand the last time they followed Isuzu into battle, at Milne Bay back in June 1943, the mission went very badly. Hibiki was the only ship to escape sinking or serious damage.

At least the ships are heading south. There is a brisk wind blowing as the ships leave Tokyo Bay and once out into the open ocean Hibiki staggers through cold gray waves. Icy spray douses even lookouts up on the tower. The average February temperature in Saipan is around 25 degrees C., and that sound pretty good to most of the crew right now.




Cuttlefish -> RE: Small Ship, Big War - Interlude (5/17/2008 4:16:44 AM)

February 19, 1944

Location: 220 miles southeast of Iwo Jima
Course: South
Attached to: TF 33
Mission: Surface Combat
System Damage: 0
Float Damage: 0
Fires: 0
Fuel: 389

Orders: Proceed to Saipan

---

“I confess, sir, I’ve hardly even heard of Woleai,” says Lieutenant Miharu. “What do we have there?”

Captain Ishii shrugs. “A small airstrip and maybe a few hundred men, the last I heard,” he says. “Though for all I know the defenses might have been increased since the fall of Manus.”

“The enemy might have an easy time seizing it, then,” says the lieutenant.

“Maybe,” says Captain Ishii. “There really isn’t much to the place. The enemy’s main problem will probably be that it’s within air range of many of our larger bases – Ulithi, Palau, Guam, Truk, and Hollandia, to name a few.”

“The enemy carriers will have to be there, then.”

“You may count on that,” says Ishii.

Lieutenant Miharu smiles faintly. “I imagine Lieutenant Sugiyura would enjoy the chance to torpedo an aircraft carrier,” he says.

“If that happens, and we live to tell the tale,” says Captain Ishii, “I will build a shrine for Seaman Oizuma’s python with my own hands.”




ChezDaJez -> RE: Small Ship, Big War - Interlude (5/17/2008 7:42:35 AM)


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ORIGINAL: Cuttlefish

February 19, 1944

Location: 220 miles southeast of Iwo Jima
Course: South
Attached to: TF 33
Mission: Surface Combat
System Damage: 0
Float Damage: 0
Fires: 0
Fuel: 389

Orders: Proceed to Saipan

---

“I confess, sir, I’ve hardly even heard of Woleai,” says Lieutenant Miharu. “What do we have there?”

Captain Ishii shrugs. “A small airstrip and maybe a few hundred men, the last I heard,” he says. “Though for all I know the defenses might have been increased since the fall of Manus.”

“The enemy might have an easy time seizing it, then,” says the lieutenant.

“Maybe,” says Captain Ishii. “There really isn’t much to the place. The enemy’s main problem will probably be that it’s within air range of many of our larger bases – Ulithi, Palau, Guam, Truk, and Hollandia, to name a few.”

“The enemy carriers will have to be there, then.”

“You may count on that,” says Ishii.

Lieutenant Miharu smiles faintly. “I imagine Lieutenant Sugiyura would enjoy the chance to torpedo an aircraft carrier,” he says.

“If that happens, and we live to tell the tale,” says Captain Ishii, “I will build a shrine for Seaman Oizuma’s python with my own hands.”




I sure hope this is a foretelling of the future!

Chez




Terminus -> RE: Small Ship, Big War - Interlude (5/17/2008 2:40:39 PM)

Once more into the breech, dear friends, once more.




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