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ORIGINAL: ComradeP

Thanks for the AAR.

There are a number of errors in the Logistics Phase Event log screen:

"been" should be "has been/have been" or "was/were"

"Fuel refinaries" should be fuel refineries.

"Consumed by vehicles production" should be consumed by vehicle production.

Oil probably isn't consumed by oil production, but by fuel production.

"Aircraft factroties" should be aircraft factories.

"aircarft production" should be aircraft production.

"aicraft factory locations" should be aircraft factory locations.

Whatever "ground types" are, it would make more sense to make it singular instead of plural, so ground type instead of ground types.

"Ground types prodyction" should be ground type (or types) production.

"form *number* manpower centers" should be "from *number* manpower center.

I was under the impression that there was only a motor pool, not a motor pool and a logistics vehicle pool, if so it might make sense to change the "trucks were repaired and returned to the logistics pool" to trucks were repaired and returned to the motor pool.

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makes it look like I was the one writing it, think he was in a hurry so they could let us have it, will ask for some corrections