parusski
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Joined: 5/8/2000 From: Jackson Tn Status: offline
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ORIGINAL: parusski Warspite1 is actually running scared, like a British soccer player prancing around in shorts and tossing his long flowing hair. Where was I? Oh, warspite1 knows I shall catch and surpass him. I'm not a betting man, but I'm not counting you out, either, no-sirree. Then again, you're gonna have to get your word-count under control if you're ever going to make it. Economy of language is what it's all about, like a glass of water between mouthfuls on an episode of Man vs Food. My comments aren't intended to be a criticism, BTW, but, rather, as a realistic appreciation of your circumstances and the task ahead. MY word count? Good God have you seen the novels warspite1 the footballer in shorts prancing around tossing his long flowing hair has written. It takes me hours to read some of his posts. Just look at the Peanut Brittle stories.
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