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Cuttlefish -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (4/25/2008 10:09:37 PM)

January 17, 1944

Location: Tokyo
Course: None
Attached to: Disbanded in port
Mission: None
System Damage: 2
Float Damage: 0
Fires: 0
Fuel: 475

Orders: Await further orders.

---

It is well after dark when Yamato and her escorts reach Tokyo Bay. Luck, the extra anti-submarine measures taken, or both have gotten them through without attack. Captain Ishii brings Hibiki smartly up to her assigned pier and soon the destroyer is on berth.

Morning brings with it a row of ambulances. Sick sailors are taken off the ship while steam lines are run aboard along with the water and power lines. The heads and bunk spaces are going to be thoroughly cleaned and then repainted.

One of the first of the healthy crewmen off the ship is Taiki. He heads to a nearby headquarters building where there are telephones set aside for the use of crewmen and ruthlessly appropriates one. He then spends a couple of hours trying to put a phone call through to Maebashi in Gunma Prefecture, where his parents live. Japan’s telephone system is one of the most extensive in the world, but placing a long-distance call still takes time, money, and persistence.

Eventually, however, he gets through, and soon afterwards he is talking to his father.

---

“A three-day pass so you can get married?” says Lieutenant Miharu. “I am sorry, Takahashi, but I don’t think I can honor that request.”

“Sir,” says Taiki in anguish, “I have waited over half a year for…” The ship’s executive officer holds up a hand.

“I know the circumstances,” the ship’s executive officer says. “But for something like this I think we need to consult the Captain. Ah, there he is now.” Taiki is aghast.

“Sir,” he says, “please, I understand. You don’t need to…”

But Lieutenant Miharu is already signaling to Captain Ishii, who has just come out on deck. “Captain Ishii, sir, could I have a moment?” calls the lieutenant. Captain Ishii walks over.

“What is it, Exec?” he says. Taiki stands braced at attention.

“Well, sir, Petty Officer Second Class Takahashi here wants a three-day pass so he can go get married. I told him that sadly I could not honor that request.”

“Quite right,” says Captain Ishii seriously. He turns to Taiki. “I am surprised at you, Takahashi. A three-day pass?”

“Sir,” says Taiki, biting back a groan, “if I am required aboard ship then of course I withdraw my request.”

Captain Ishii snorts. “This ship is going nowhere soon,” he says, “not with almost fifty crew in the hospital.” He clasps his hands behind his back and addresses Lieutenant Miharu. “There is no way we can grant Petty Officer Second Class Takahashi a three-day pass,” he says. “However, I think Petty Officer First Class Takahashi could get a seven-day pass, could he not?”

Lieutenant Miharu nods. “That is what I was thinking, sir,” he says. It takes a moment for this to sink in, but when it does Taiki’s jaw drops a little. Lieutenant Miharu smiles.

“The paperwork is already taken care of,” he says. He reaches into his pocket and takes out a folded piece of paper. “Congratulations on your promotion and your upcoming wedding,” he says. He gives Taiki the pass.

Taiki looks down at the pass and then up at the two officers, still stunned.

“Well, what are you waiting for?” says Captain Ishii. “Get out of here, young man.”

Taiki suddenly smiles and then salutes. “Yes sir, I will. Thank you, sir. Sirs.” He hurries below to grab his duffel. If he is quick, he thinks, he should be able to catch the afternoon train to Maebashi.




Terminus -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (4/25/2008 10:12:04 PM)

SCORE![:D][:D][:D]




alaviner -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (4/25/2008 11:46:48 PM)


quote:

ORIGINAL: Terminus

SCORE![:D][:D][:D]

in more ways than just one [:D][:D]

grate stuff CF




bobogoboom -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (4/26/2008 1:21:26 AM)

and more than once.[:D]




Onime No Kyo -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (4/26/2008 6:05:27 AM)

From what we know of Taiki, I have serious doubts that he'd know what to do. [X(][:D]




histgamer -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (4/26/2008 7:37:46 AM)

He will find out soon enough.[:D]




princep01 -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (4/26/2008 11:53:42 PM)

Gentlemen, please.  He is both a sailor and a man.  He will perform admirably and with both respect and honor for his bride.  Have no fear.




whippleofd -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (4/27/2008 12:10:22 AM)

[:D]

Yea right.

Whipple




kaleun -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (4/27/2008 4:00:33 AM)

And no Viagra yet!
Maybe Rhino horn.[;)]




Mike Solli -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (4/27/2008 5:44:03 AM)


quote:

ORIGINAL: kaleun

And no Viagra yet!
Maybe Rhino horn.[;)]


I have a sneaky suspicion he won't need any......




String -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (4/27/2008 2:20:20 PM)

I wonder if Cuttlefish will bring in guest writers? I recall and old Europa Universalis AAR from paradox forums where a guest writer, who was given pretty much a free hand, wrote a pretty steamy scene... [:D]




kaleun -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (4/27/2008 5:59:33 PM)

Nah! This is a PG rated forum.




alaviner -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (4/27/2008 6:24:15 PM)


quote:

ORIGINAL: String

I wonder if Cuttlefish will bring in guest writers? I recall and old Europa Universalis AAR from paradox forums where a guest writer, who was given pretty much a free hand, wrote a pretty steamy scene... [:D]


So there I was with a ....[:D][:D][:D]




tocaff -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (4/27/2008 6:32:32 PM)

Guest writers?  What for?  CF is weaving his tale in grand fashion and needs no help.




Redd -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (4/27/2008 8:33:04 PM)

Damn straight brother.[;)]




Cuttlefish -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (4/28/2008 12:55:48 AM)

January 18, 1944

Location: Tokyo
Course: None
Attached to: Disbanded in port
Mission: None
System Damage: 1
Float Damage: 0
Fires: 0
Fuel: 475

Orders: Await further orders.

---

Morito Miharu and his new friend are sitting on the end of an old fishing pier in Osaka. They are eating dinner while looking out over the harbor. No one will bother a couple of laborers sitting out here, watching the ships come and go,

“I think we have enough money to buy a meal tomorrow as well, Suzuki,” says Morito. “But then we need to find more work.”

“We need to move on,” says Umeda. “Too many people around here know our faces.”

Morito nods. “You are not wrong. Well, I know a man in Nagasaki who might be willing to help us. He has been forced to recant his beliefs, but he was once a loyal Communist.” Privately Umeda thinks the phrase “loyal Communist” is an oxymoron, but he says nothing. He needs this idiot and his connections to stay ahead of the police.

“Nagasaki it is, then,” he says. The two men sit and eat. Out on the harbor a warship, which Umeda easily identifies as a Yugumo-class destroyer, cruises slowly past.

“My brother is an officer aboard a destroyer,” says Morito around a mouthful of rice. “I hope he is all right.” Umeda’s interest sharpens suddenly. He remembers that it was his attempt to arrest a Lieutenant Miharu that led to his downfall.

“What ship?” he asks, managing to sound casual.

Hibiki,” says Morito. Umeda’s face remains impassive but inside he churns with emotion. This treasonous fool beside me is the man I was investigating when I went to question Lieutenant Miharu, he realizes. Truly, fate is aiding me in my quest for revenge. He thinks quickly.

“Really?” he says in a tone of mild interest. “I know a man aboard that ship. Shun, his name is.”

“You know Shun?” asks Morito in delight. “My brother used to tell me stories about him, back before the war when we were still speaking to one another. A man of great strength, I hear.”

“Oh yes. Very fast too,” says Umeda, striving to keep bitterness out of his voice. His broken wrist still throbs on cold nights.

“Truly, it is a small world,” says Morito.

“So it seems,” says Umeda. He spins a quick lie. “Shun’s family helped my father once. They might be willing to help me. If only I could remember where they lived…”

“Okinawa,” says Morito promptly. “A small village, I should be able to recall the name…hmm…well, it will come to me.”

“I’m sure that it will,” says Umeda.




Terminus -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (4/28/2008 1:24:31 AM)

Oooh, cue sinister music...[:D]




histgamer -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (4/28/2008 1:44:28 AM)

Psh if Shun saw Umeda again is would not be Shun's end bu Umeda's I mean even with a silly pistol Shun would simply crush the gun with his one hand and snap Umeda's neck with the other. He is like the Japanese Hercules. Heck Shun is probably even bullet proof.




Terminus -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (4/28/2008 1:49:21 AM)

DON'T SAY THAT!!! Now Shun will get killed![:-]




Japanese_Spirit -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (4/28/2008 2:48:39 AM)

Just to say I'm still reading this epic tale Cuttlefish and I really am enjoying it still! Yes, I did a post of guest writing for CF about a year ago. Just a newspaper article to practice my story telling skills. It was fun and I thank Cuttlefish for that opportunity. Sadly though it never recieved much acclaim from readers although CF and Wolf enjoyed it which is good. [:D]

Anyway, just to keep up this epic tale! When I first wrote that article for CF, the Hibiki felt more like a typical AAR with a back story. But now, it feels like a fully fledged novel. The detail is excellent. CF really could make a career in writing.

CF, keep up the good work and this story has inspired me also to consider writing something of my own in the future. It's just a perfect setting. Instead of long posts with pictures, just the simple setting of telling a story about a crew on a destroyer in small to medium posts is an excellent way not to get stressed about updating and to keep the story flowing nicely.





vettim89 -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (4/28/2008 5:23:30 AM)

Cuttlefish,

If I may ask a few questions.

1. Now that Hibiki is at Tokyo, is it not possible for the crew to interact with other players in teh war so we might get an idea of how things are going in the Big Picture?

2. Can you honestly say you do not let this AAR affect how Hibiki is deployed? Just wondering if you ever find yourself forming up new TF's and purposely assign or don't assign Hibiki because of the AAR?

What amazes me about this story is you obviously have some ideas on where the story is going but ultimately the flow of the story and certainly its end are to a degree out of your control. Even more reason to be in awe of your skill in writing this narrative

[&o][&o][&o][&o]




Cuttlefish -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (4/28/2008 6:02:24 AM)


quote:

ORIGINAL: vettim89

Cuttlefish,

If I may ask a few questions.

1. Now that Hibiki is at Tokyo, is it not possible for the crew to interact with other players in teh war so we might get an idea of how things are going in the Big Picture?

2. Can you honestly say you do not let this AAR affect how Hibiki is deployed? Just wondering if you ever find yourself forming up new TF's and purposely assign or don't assign Hibiki because of the AAR?

What amazes me about this story is you obviously have some ideas on where the story is going but ultimately the flow of the story and certainly its end are to a degree out of your control. Even more reason to be in awe of your skill in writing this narrative



1. Yes, we will pick up news from all over while Hibiki is in Tokyo. As always, though, some of what the crew hears may be of questionable accuracy.

2. Honestly? I try not to let it influence me too much but the AAR probably does have an influence on what happens to Hibiki. This trip to Tokyo is a good case in point. There were about 10 destroyers at Kwaj that were good candidates to use as Yamato's escorts. I picked Hibiki as one of them because I wanted to get the crew back to Japan for a bit. I think that what mostly happens, though, is that Hibiki tends to get picked for combat missions more often than the average destroyer.




Feinder -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (4/28/2008 7:08:54 AM)

quote:

  I think that what mostly happens, though, is that Hibiki tends to get picked for combat missions more often than the average destroyer.


That tends be one of those annoying side-effects of success...

-F-




Capt. Harlock -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (4/28/2008 7:18:16 AM)

quote:

It is well after dark when Yamato and her escorts reach Tokyo Bay. Luck, the extra anti-submarine measures taken, or both have gotten them through without attack. Captain Ishii brings Hibiki smartly up to her assigned pier and soon the destroyer is on berth.


Drat! So much for Round 2 of "The Enemy Below". Sometimes I think Hibiki is coated with submarine repellent![:D]




histgamer -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (4/28/2008 7:42:12 AM)

We all know Hibiki and any jap DD isnt great vs sub's so its prolly better they sprayed all that repellent on the side. Better avoid them if you dont have a resonable chance at sinking them.[:D]




Cuttlefish -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (4/29/2008 1:01:45 AM)

January 19, 1944

Location: Tokyo
Course: None
Attached to: Disbanded in port
Mission: None
System Damage: 1
Float Damage: 0
Fires: 0
Fuel: 475

Orders: Await further orders.

---

Taiki Takahashi and Sayumi Komatsu are married in the afternoon in a traditional Shinto ceremony which is short, simple, and solemn. As is customary only immediate family members are in attendance. Sayumi’s family is quite small but her sister is there and her first mother-in-law stands in for her deceased mother.

The reception afterwards is considerably larger and more colorful. To Taiki’s delight both Riku and Shiro are there. Riku is pale and considerably more subdued than he usually is on such occasions. He spends most of his time sitting down, but he stands when Taiki approaches and clasps Taiki’s hand.

“Ariga-san!” says Taiki. “You should not be out of bed!”

Riku smiles faintly. “That is what Lieutenant Nakagawa said,” he replies. “But I would not miss this. It is good to celebrate new beginnings and new hope in the middle of war. Oh, and this is for you and your new bride.” He pulls out a traditional gift envelope and hands it to Taiki.

Taiki bows. “Thank you, my friend,” he says. “I hope it is not too much. You may have your own bride to think of some day. Speaking of which, has Shun said anything further?”

“Not yet,” says Riku. “But he will. He always does what he says he will do.” Taiki nods. Riku sits back down.

“You will forgive me, I hope, if I do not dance much,” he says. Taiki assures him that he understands, then he turns to greet Shiro. Shiro has brought his camera and takes a number of pictures. He promises to give copies of them to Taiki.

There are many other friends to greet and ceremonies to observe. As the reception continues, however, Taiki is taken aside by his brother Noboru.

“Forgive me, Taiki, but you seem a bit nervous,” says Noboru.

“We leave for Hakone soon,” says Taiki.

“It is beautiful there,” says Noboru. “An excellent place for a honeymoon. The two of you will have a wonderful time.”

“I am sure we will,” says Taiki. “It’s just that…well, you see…I mean…”

His brother laughs loudly, then becomes more serious. “Look, Taiki,” he says, “may your older brother give you some advice?”

“Please!” says Taiki.

“Then what I will tell you is this,” Noboru says. “Your lovely bride is a widow. This has certain advantages. Allow her to…guide you. Stop worrying and simply do as she suggests and everything will work out just fine.”

And as it turns out, this is excellent advice.




Terminus -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (4/29/2008 1:03:07 AM)

Nudge-nudge, Wink-wink, say no more![;)][;)][;)]




Cuttlefish -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (4/29/2008 2:33:21 AM)

January 20, 1944

Location: Tokyo
Course: None
Attached to: Disbanded in port
Mission: None
System Damage: 0
Float Damage: 0
Fires: 0
Fuel: 475

Orders: Await further orders.

---

The first reaction many of Hibiki’s crew have to being home is that it is cold. Since the start of the war the destroyer has operated far to the south and her only visits to Japan have been in the spring and summer. The men have gotten used to tropical heat and the light snow currently dusting Tokyo is a bit of a shock.

There are other changes that the crew finds that are more significant than just the weather. Though the war has not yet come close to Japan its effects are being felt there more and more. The most obvious thing is the growing casualty lists. To fall in battle is of course the ideal of every member of the Japanese military, and to have a son, a brother, or a husband killed in the war is a matter of pride for most Japanese, at least publicly.

This attitude towards death blunts but does not eliminate the sense of loss for the growing numbers of young men who have fallen in far-away places, men who will never again return to their families. The mood in Japan is still resolute but a bit less bright somehow than it was in the early days of the war. As yet the general populace is still unaware that the enemy is advancing in the Pacific and that Japan’s carrier forces have been largely destroyed.

Most of the war news for the past few months, in fact, has centered on Burma. Much has been reported of the heroic stand of the Japanese Army at Mandalay, where a large Allied army has been stalled for many weeks. Attempts to outflank the city and force the Japanese to retreat have been made on both flanks. The result has been that the Japanese position in Burma resembles a huge horseshoe, with Mandalay at the top of the curve. Japanese newspapers boast that the stand at Mandalay is proof that Japan’s new empire is unassailable and that the bright dream of a Greater East Asia Co-Prosperity Sphere is in fact a reality.

Undercutting this optimism are the shortages. Earlier in the war the Allied submarine campaign went from being the subject of jokes to a serious threat. Now it is a scourge. The amount of raw material reaching Japan has declined drastically. Last year’s rice crop was only average and imports of food have fallen short of meeting demand. Japan’s industry has been affected as well. Production of steel, of aluminum, of rubber, of fuel oil, of aviation gas, and of a dozen other important commodities has increased since the start of the war but is not currently sufficient to meet Japan’s expanded war needs. And there is concern over how long even the current production levels can be maintained in the face of declining imports of raw material.

Despite these problems Hibiki’s men find that the familiar rhythms of life in Japan mostly continue as they have always known them. This is reassuring, to know that the land they are fighting for still endures and is still strong in the face of the enemy’s gathering power.




histgamer -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (4/29/2008 7:31:09 AM)

It is like Lord of the Rings (thinking more of the book) in Japan this is the calm before the storm. The black war clouds are gathering and the hords of enamy troops are nocking at the gate. Japan does not have the military power to resist this assult and in the end defeat must result. However the question is how long may they hold out and can they obtain victory with other avenues unlooked for...[:D]




mdiehl -> RE: Small Ship, Big War (4/30/2008 12:55:28 AM)

Mordor's empire contracting?




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