zanekin
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While translating the manual in french (see: http://www.matrixgames.com/forums/tm.asp?m=2731858&mpage=1&key= )
I found some issues:
- p 67, 5.3.4 : the "gameplay info" at the bottom of the amphibious transport mode description refer to the next section 5.3.5 Air recon mode
- p 77 and after, 5.4.2 : the "permanent losses" column descrption might be divided in the subsequent three sub-columns
- p 81, 5.4.3.5 : the "supply stores" is misplaced and not in bold
- p 85, 5.4.5.1 : the right and left side of the screen are reversed in the description
- p 90, 5.4.9 : reference to Appendix C is incorrect (section 26.3 and not 28.3)
- p 101, 5.4.14 and in the next sections : the title of the 'supply status' descritption is missing.
- p 116, 5.4.26.1 reference to 'Supply buildup' is incorrect: (20.6) and not (20.7)
- p 117, 5.4.26.3 'Range to HQ' same as 'MP to HQ'... should be: 'Number of hexes....'
- p 119, ASSIGN/FORM, replace 'headquarters' by 'town, city and urban hexes'
bump for future updates of the manual:
- p 139, 7.5.3.6 "If the merging unit is a smaller size unit, than only one third of its TOE percentage counts." should be "If the merging unit is a smaller size unit, then only one third of its TOE percentage counts."
- p140 7.5.4.1 last sentence: "... bordered in white when the Info screen tab View Unit Modes button (Shift-R hotkey) has been toggled on (5.1.2.1)." should be " ... bordered in white when the Map Information tab View Unit Modes button (Shift-R hotkey) has been toggled on (5.1.2.1).
- p 150, the update manual incorrectly refer the "Auto-Attachment Rules" as 7.7.1.1. so the original 7.7.1. paragraph disappear from the contents
- p 153, 8.1.3 the reference of the commander's report (' missing) is wrong: 5.4.9 not 9.5.4.
- p 177, 11.4.1. second paragraph, third sentence is useless as it's the same as the first sentence of the paragraph...
- p 181 an 183, note 4 seems to refer to table 12.2.1 rather than 12.2.2
- p 198, 14.2.3. in the game play warning, the second SMP cost (to re-embark) should be 30 and not 15
- p 215, 15.7.2. refer correctly to Show Losses Screen (5.4.2) but in the update manual it reverse incorrectly to (5.2).
- p 219, 15.9.3. bad layout both in the original and revised manual. There should be 4 possibility (as in the previous paragraph 15.9.2)
- p 335, 26.3.8.3 there is thirteen and not twelve columns of characteristics.
< Message edited by zanekin -- 8/26/2011 1:55:36 PM >
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